Antigone Cadmus

Hey, Marshmallow Warrior! There is one error you repeat constantly: You always need to capitalize your I's Things were unravelling to fast, He was never going to stop, was he? ...

Hey, Abstract Poet! Here as requested! resounding barrump Put onomatopoeias in italics. It emphasizes them and makes it cleared where they are. A small smile waltzed on the edges of ...

You'll find a large anti-Twilight club here. I hate Twilight, but I don't want to start another debate (there ate tons of threads like this) My advice? Go read Anne ...

Hey, Always a writer! Just a few nit-picks: Alanis scrambles up the latter after her. -Latter should be ladder . -Eh. I'm not really a big fan of this first ...

Hey, mhmmcolleenx0! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ Yeah, spell check does that to me as well. Don't worry -- all the contractions (didn't,wasn't..etc) were fine. Onto ...

Heelllloooooooo, Lily! I guess I felt it was time to take matters into my own hands, time to relieve you of the burden dumped on you fourteen years ago. I ...

Hey, 1stViolinS.C.! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ First of all: Why not post this is Historical Fiction? It is telling a true story, but it's purpose ...

Hey, Stori! This a lot clearer than your prologue, but parts are still confusing. Why am I so different? The cry rang in Tion's mind. You put all of this ...

Hey, Stori! I'm not at all familiar with what this is based off of. To answer your questions (as your grammar is fine): 1. Is the use of bold and ...

Hey, evil_kookies! Nice to meet you! I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ There are way too many errors in this to do a line by line, so ...

This is for a paper? :? It needs some work... Oh well, that's why I'm here! I always liked my life well I used to. Try to read this outloud. ...

Heeeellllllllllo, Amon! Um, could you try to post your chapters in numerical order? I don't see how this fits in with chapter one at all. ^_^ Veronica froze outside the ...

Hey, Crazy Girl. Whoa. Whoa. This is waaaaay too much to post. I give very detailed reviews- this often means I give line by line critiques. Seeing this much is ...

Hey, Olivia Campbell! Nice to meet you! I haven't seen you around here... perhaps you should go and introdcue yourself in the welcome forum? Anyway, one of the rules here ...

Night, here as requested! “Dude, you need to get laid,” Doug said It's a funny first line... it your characters are teenagers. Make sure the reader is aware that you ...